Progress #45

by willsauger

SLOW going. I’ve been swamped with college before spring break.

I tried writing my new WIP in first person, and it just didn’t work well. I wasn’t as comfortable as I typically am in third. And also, I was afraid I’d turn one of my characters into the annoying cynical narrator. Switching back to third and revisiting the same scene for the third time, I added so much more and better detail. Odd. I also was forced into a more subjective POV in first, and had to struggle to convey the scene effectively (especially when the scene was so far from norm). 

Oh well. Better get back to work.